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Researcher 178815 Started conversation Jun 9, 2001
Hi
Very good, but the occasional line goes against the set rhythm by the other lines, though this is a good thing, according to my english teacher 
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Researcher 178815 Posted Jun 9, 2001
Oops! my signature messed up! aka
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djsdude Posted Jun 10, 2001
The first poem is excellent. I loved it. As for the second, keep working on it. I'm not sure what the 'received her pearl' line means. Maybe I'm being thick. Hope it wasn't inserted purely for rhyming purposes. Good one. Enjoyed the chance to read them.
Djs
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Chris M Posted Jun 11, 2001
Once or twice a day I'll walk
through fields filled with text
more often than not it seems I find
the content has me vexed.
but once or twice I'll see a gleam
of heart midst the affray
and humour in the weariness.
Good work mate. F*****g A.
Keep it up.
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threesecondmemory Posted Feb 7, 2002
I liked the wait very much. Very honest and from the heart.
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 8, 2002
it wasn't meant to be funny. the guy had lost his life! geeze!
And about "Wait", thanks for the comment, luckily i haven't actualy been in that situation, but i reacon i will of been soon.
I must say i'm sorry the're a little depressing,"in deep" is meant to be a love poem... lol, i may change the title to "reserection" i'm not sure. its my stle of love poem you see, showing how life is bleak without it and how one person can give you a compleatly diffrent view of it.
cheers for the comments,
Lord Preston OMFC 
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threesecondmemory Posted Feb 9, 2002
Well if "the wait" isn't written from personal experience then you have an good insight/empathy/whatever into what people in those situations must feel. Which is even more impressive. Liked it a lot.
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 9, 2002
cheers, your comments are very encouraing 
Lord Preston OMFC
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 11, 2002
am i to truth that you like them aka? up to the usual standad for ya?
Lord Preston OMFC
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Researcher 178815 Posted Feb 12, 2002
I like it - or them - I can't remember - I read it ages ago - I'll reread when i get back from school - gotta go now - Bye!! 
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 12, 2002
its still the same 1st one but i removed the 2nd and have added 2 more, so get reading! lol
Lord Preston OMFC
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 14, 2002
ok, i wait with baited breath for your decissions.
Lord Preston OMFC
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Deidzoeb Posted Feb 24, 2002
Hi Lord,
I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I liked the first one. Did you really mean it to be serious?
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Lord Preston Posted Feb 24, 2002
i know its written in simple verse, i did that because i was wanting a simple message 2 b brought across. i did also give it a kinda childish and comedy feel i guess. but it is meant 2 b serious yes. Lord Preston OMFC
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