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shagbark

Of the three poems Iliked the third one best.
The first was well thought out but I wondered about the metre.
Was it deliberate that each stanza had a shorter last line.
I counted sylables there were 8 then 7 then six then five.
I've often thought h2g2 should have some place to showcase poetry.
Best regards Shagbarksmiley - towel


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