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Please review my entry about Joy Division.

There are currently no entries about this important UK band, and I believe that there should.

I love the band and have thoroughly researched the subject.

Thank you.

Transmission.

how about adding a link to the oficial website?

Thanks for the suggestion.

I will be more than happy to be corrected on this, but I don't believe that there is an official web site for Joy Division.

Factory records was taken over by London Records who, in turn are owned by Warber Brothers.

There was an "official" site whilst they were promoting their "Best Of" album, but the site has now disappeared.

There are plenty of unofficial sites, and if you can find an official site I'd be happy to include a link.

Thanks,

Transmission.

Not a bad entry at all, but you use first-person at the end. How about using the blockquote tag to indicate your personal opinions?

There could be an editorial problem with the first peron thing at the end, but otherwise I like it.

Thanks for everyone's comments.

I must admit, I was unsure about the personal bit when I wrote it, so I've now removed it but added a little bit more text to the paragraph describing the music, and I've added a new sentence at the end.

I also noticed a minor mistake in the track listing, which I've now corrected.

Thanks again everyone.

Transmission.

Hey, there's nothing wrong with including personal opinions, as long as you use something like the blockquote tag to differentiate. Take a look at my entry about The Hole at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A540181 to see an example

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Congratulations!

Wahey! Nice one, Transmission

Thanks Huw, and thanks to the "powers that be."

I'm chuffed!

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