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Peer Review: A2347607 - Z.Z's Guide to Bearded Dragons
Tacysa Started conversation Mar 13, 2004
Entry: Z.Z's Guide to Bearded Dragons - A2347607
Author: ZubZubZing - U576757
I'm just giving this article a kick in a direction, here. Z.Z., you might want to go to the GuideML clinic and put in headers and the like since that is what has always been suggested to me. It makes everything look neat and easier to read. Very well put together entry! Stacy.
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frenchbean Posted Mar 13, 2004
Hello 
Great entry 
It flows really well and reads easily.
However, the author's note isn't house style and should come out. Guide entries should be in the third person, so you can refer to 'the researcher' instead of 'I'.
I suggest you read the writing guidelines on A53209 and the guide to GuideML to get the format right on A264520 and use those to get this entry into shape.
Once you've done that, you're onto a winner here 
I'll come back and comment on the content once you let us know that you've done the format
Frenchbean
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McKay The Disorganised Posted Mar 14, 2004
I agree - this is good, but the commercial links will have to come out, and a couple of the others don't work.
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frenchbean Posted Mar 14, 2004
Oh, and I suggest the title changes to 'Bearded Dragons' or 'A Guide (or An Introduction) to Bearded Dragons' Some such.
F/b
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Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) Posted Mar 15, 2004
Thx for the crits, all noted.
The dead link, most likey my dragon's homepage, is dead due to the site being returned to the drawing board stage, I'm having serious scripting issues with it and have taken it offline to resolve them. It should be back online in a few days time. If you can point me in the direction of any others I'd be most appreciative.
I'll sort the other things out when I get a mo - I'm in the middle of a stageshow at present! I hadn't actually intended for it to get to the PR stage...needless to say I'm still somewhat stunned by the whole thing. 
As for guideML, for some obscure reason despite my best attempts to code the article up, I have met with (shall we say) limited success.
Anyone know who I call on to get the conversations removed the article? I think they really should be nuked.
Cheers!
- Z.Z
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Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) Posted Mar 16, 2004
All amendments made as req'd. Pls feel free to point out any errors or omissions no matter how trivial!
Also got the GML working, FINALLY!
- Z.Z
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Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted Mar 16, 2004
To make your links clickable, try the following format (I've used an example of dragon pictures):
Dragon pictures
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Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) Posted Mar 16, 2004
Just noticed & amended that actually but thx for the feedback
It totally slipped my mind.
- Z.Z
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Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted Mar 16, 2004
Please check your first link, ZZ - it doesn't work for me.
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Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) Posted Mar 16, 2004
Link trouble resolved...flippin' forwarding issue. *Grumbles*
- Z.Z
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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Jun 11, 2004
Hmmmm.... I was going to make some comments about formatting changes that need to happen, but the author doesn't appear to have been around for a bit -- has anyone seen her?
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Tacysa Posted Jun 11, 2004
Nope. She's been incommunicado for quite a bit, actually.
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Geggs Posted Aug 7, 2004
Indeed. Given that continued absence, I propose moving this entry to the Flea Market.
Geggs
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GreyDesk Posted Aug 7, 2004
How about the AWW instead? Throw it Jodan's lot with the underguide and the AGG/CAC/CCA crew.
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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Sep 10, 2004
I'll agree to a AWW move, and add it to the email.
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Peer Review: A2347607 - Z.Z's Guide to Bearded Dragons
- 1: Tacysa (Mar 13, 2004)
- 2: frenchbean (Mar 13, 2004)
- 3: McKay The Disorganised (Mar 14, 2004)
- 4: frenchbean (Mar 14, 2004)
- 5: Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) (Mar 15, 2004)
- 6: Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) (Mar 16, 2004)
- 7: Zarquon's Singing Fish! (Mar 16, 2004)
- 8: Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) (Mar 16, 2004)
- 9: Zarquon's Singing Fish! (Mar 16, 2004)
- 10: Midnight of Sevenshades (Z.Z) (Mar 16, 2004)
- 11: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Jun 11, 2004)
- 12: Tacysa (Jun 11, 2004)
- 13: Geggs (Aug 7, 2004)
- 14: GreyDesk (Aug 7, 2004)
- 15: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Sep 10, 2004)
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