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Peer Review: A429400 - Israel

Post 1

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

Entry: Israel - A429400
Author: id - U150703

This is an old entry I found that I think worthy of the EG. The author is gone now but the entry is still great.


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Post 2

anhaga

The entry needs a deal of grammatical proof-reading. As well, the history of the region between Old Testament times and the fall of "the Ottoman" is glossed over rather quickly but has a great bearing on the present situation of the state of Israel.

Anhaga


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Post 3

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

The person who wrote it is gone now, so they can't do anything to it. I think a sub needs to get their hands on it and give it a good working over.smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Looking at it, it looks like more than I would want to ask a sub to take on. If you're wanting this entry to make it through PR, it might be worthwhile to go to testA429400, copy the GuideML, and paste it into a new entry of your own so that you can do whatever edits are needed and then submit that version to Peer Review.

Just my smiley - 2cents
Mikey


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Post 5

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

smiley - biggrinGood idea! I'll think about it...smiley - winkeye


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Post 6

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

That being the case, I'd like to move that we move this thread out of PR. If and when you create a new entry out of this one (remember, you can just go to test429400 for the GuideML), you can submit that entry to PR. How does that sound?

Any seconders?

smiley - mouse


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Post 7

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

And oops! Now the entry has been moderated out of existence. And since the author's long gone, I don't know that we have any hopes of finding out why or of being able to copy the old text.

Even more reason to move the thread out of PR, then, I guess....

smiley - wah
Mikey


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Post 8

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

smiley - wah


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Post 9

Rho

Seconded smiley - erm

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 10

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

Goodbye, entry...


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Post 11

Rho

Don't forget to post to the group! smiley - winkeye

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 12

Oberon2001 (Scout)

smiley - erm Anyone know why this was modded? I'd quite like to take this over (obviously taking out the bad bits)
Oberon2001


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Post 13

Rho

I assume it was plagiarised, but didn't see the entry...

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 14

J

Why is this still in PR?

I assume the Grim Reaper will have a visit?

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 15

Rho

This shouldn't still be here. smiley - erm

Thanks for bumping up the thread - I'll post to the group now.

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 16

J

Still here...

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 17

Trout Montague

Can't see the point of this. It's hidden. Still.


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Post 18

Oberon2001 (Scout)

Don't worry, the Scouts have asked for it to be moved from PR.
Oberon2001


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