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EF: A66569115 - History of Manufacturing Glass

Post 1

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

A66569115 - A Brief History of Manufacturing Glass for Windows

1st paragraph 'museums' > A79633164

'Glass technology'
1st paragraph 'blowing' > A442658
4th paragraph (list) 'calcium' > A1002934

'Industrialisation'
3rd paragraph 'Glasgow' > A3859220
'paper' > A839216
5th paragraph 'Germany' > A297092

'Applications'
1st paragraph 'solar' > A356852


EF: A66569115 - History of Manufacturing Glass

Post 2

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ok

Thanks Tav. I also added:

A3383868 - Romans
A2027008 - the UK
A3768816 - nitrogen
A597215 - lasers
A565832 - gravity
A139394 - seaweed
A4454967 - The Anglo-Irish Question, Part 2: 1845 - 1900 (potato famine)
A87886525 - Lever Brothers
A31549728 - patent
A1047818 - temperature

smiley - tea
I changed this in the text:

>>Henry Deacon married Emma Wade, after which the present Wade Deacon High School is named.<<
changed to:
Henry Deacon married Emma Wade, after whom the present Wade Deacon High School is named.

smiley - cheers


EF: A66569115 - History of Manufacturing Glass

Post 3

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - cheers thanks!


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