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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Started conversation May 26, 2014
There are 2 minor changes to make in this Entry, please:
'The most remarkable feature of this fungus is that it is part of the body of the Orks – and more Orks and Getchin may grow from its spores – which can lie dormant on the surface of a planet for a long time.'
I think the - is misplaced here. The sentence makes not much sense this way. It should say that the spores can lie dormant for a long time, which it doesn't. The way it reads now the Orks lie dormant.
My original sentence was: 'The most remarkable feature of this fungus is that it is part even of the body of the Orks and from its spores more Orks and Getchin may grow from its spores - which can lie dormant on the surface of a planet for a long time.'
'Another race allied to the Tau are the flying vespids...'
Give the Vespids a capital V, please.
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