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EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Started conversation Sep 24, 2013
A692769 should link to A3346995 (Super Mario)
and A3768915 should link to Super Mario too, in the Arcade section
A322354 should also link to Super Mario
EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Sep 24, 2013
Done
I didn't know where to put the link in the third one, so I put it in the right margin. If you suggest a better location, I'll move it.
EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Sep 24, 2013
In the section 'The Games' right at the top (2nd sentence) it says
'America had only Mario and Pilotwings, while Britain was treated to Mario; Pilotwings; Shadows of the Empire...'
I suggest changing 'Mario' to the more correct 'Super Mario' and adding the link.
EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Sep 24, 2013
Are both of those Marios in that sentence to be changed to Super Mario?
EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Sep 24, 2013
I'd change at least the first one, it's your decision if the second one should also be 'corrected'. People tend to often just say 'Mario' when they mean 'Super Mario'.
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EF: A692769, Donkey Kong (and others)
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- 2: Gnomon - time to move on (Sep 24, 2013)
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