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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
benjaminpmoore Started conversation Aug 30, 2006
Entry: The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler - A13334915
Author: benjaminpmoore - U3508889
Okay so this is Hitler entry number... 4. I think. I know you've all been waiting for it.
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
Leo Posted Aug 30, 2006
I don't think there's anyone here to be waitng for it. 
The usual typos, for starters:
>>The Weimarr republic
I've never seen Weimarr with two 'r's. 
Republic should be capitalised
>>Having suceeded inb getting the ban on the party lifted,
remove extraneous 'b'
>>commanding a prestide that the little Austrian Corporal struggled to match.
replace 'd' with 'g' in prestige(also: don't think corporal is capitalised)
>>In february 1925 the incumbent German President died,
capitalise feb (ditto for president)
>>precipitating an Election.
ditto for election
>>backing of strong party with Voter support
ditto for voter
>>end the General's political involvement, an
and for general
>>All of this meant that, while the constituion could in theory be broken
constitution
>>Weimarr Government was acheiving some measure of stability,
Weimarr again? Government? (lowercase)
>>The party achived some sucess- polling
achieved
until 'all or nothing'
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
KB Posted Nov 7, 2006
Benjamin, are you still working on this one?
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
benjaminpmoore Posted Nov 7, 2006
Well I haven't touched it in a while but it's still very much in progress, yes.
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
KB Posted Nov 7, 2006
No worries. Drop a note here when you've sorted the points made so far and I'll read over it again. 
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
benjaminpmoore Posted Nov 11, 2006
Addressed all of Leo's points. Anyone else got any?
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Dolt Posted Nov 11, 2006
It looks pretty good on a quick readthrough. I'll have a proper look tomorrow, but in the meantime did notice that "Hindenberg" is fairly conistently mistyped throughout, usually as "Hidenberg" and once as "Hiddenberg".
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
KB Posted Nov 17, 2006
Hi benjamin. Again mostly typos, etc. Pain in the neck, but other than that the Entry isn't bad at all!
Para 1:
politcal - political
repairations - reparations
Nazi's - Nazis'
Para 2:
I don't really understand the header "Top Right". What do you mean exactly?
it's - its
Not the last, or indeed for the first, time - Not *for* the last
Hitler's actions where - Hitler's actions were
politcal right - political right
Para 3:
When you say "blame for the Putsch (for its occurence, rather than for its failure)", it might be simpler just to say "blame for the occurence of the Putsch".
to the the esteem - to the esteem
Hidenberg - Hindenburg
Para 4:
Ludendorf - Ludendorff
Footnote 1: pragamtically = pragmatically, bough = bought, Furhrer = Fuehrer, oweing = owing
I'll leave it at that for now.
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benjaminpmoore Posted Dec 8, 2006
Isn't at all bad? I think you mean 'is a work of unparalelled genius' don't you?
Wew=kk I've made all the changes and corrected the hindenberg spellings too.
A13334915 - The Wilderness Years of Adolf Hitler
AlexAshman Posted May 20, 2009
Is this still being worked on? I've posted on another thread at F57153?thread=2827483&skip=40&show=20#p80288506
Alex 
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