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Re-written haikus
Titania (gone for lunch) Started conversation Mar 31, 2005
Somehow, I got it into my mind that haikus are 5-6-5 when, in fact, they're 5-7-5's!
Dang!
And adding a simple 'the' or '-ing' isn't enough - it'll disturb the 'flow' I sometimes seem to sense...
So... *deep sigh* ...here are my attempts to re-write some of my non-haikus...
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Winter morning sun
Its rays paint tree tops golden
Under pale blue sky
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Clouded morning sky
All is white; sky, ground and light
Spring is holding back
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Sunset setting in
Streaking sky in gold and rose
Purple fades to black
Re-written haikus
Titania (gone for lunch) Posted May 2, 2005
Thank you!
Eh - what's a Whoite? Maybe I'll find out once I've gotten through more than a week's backlog...
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Milla, h2g2 Operations Posted May 3, 2005
I've not seen the word before, but my guess is that a Whoite is a dedicated follower of the Doctor Who TV-series.
whaddayathink?
Milla
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