h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: MONTANA REMAINS - A11942633
Author: carlylyn - U4064117

Montana Remains---a short story, part fiction, part fact.
Appreciate all crits and reviews.

Carly

Hi Carly. Welcome to h2g2. Sadly, Peer Review is only for factual Entries for the Edited Guide (perhaps you could try this link for a flavour of what we're looking for: <./>RandomEditedEntry</.> )

Your story would be better in the Alternative Writing Workshop (<./>Writing-Alternative</.&gt. I'm sure it will get a very good reception there, because it's well written. Could you please remove it from Peer Review by navigating to PeerReview and clicking the 'Remove' button next to your Entry on the list at the bottom. Thanks.

B

I agree: it is beautifully written and very moving. We do, however, have the Underguide, and B's advice will speed the entry's way into it.

Thanks for sharing this with us anyway.

I'll back them up too Carly - touching and evocative - even to three dry Brits, the people who've responded.

Follow the suggestions above and your memories will find a home.

cannot find the remove button anywhere, please remove it as I am helpless!

Unfortunately, it has to be you

Go to the second posting above (Mu Beta's) and click on the underlined 'PeerReview'.

On the page that comes up, there should be a list of Entries and authors - beside your two Entries, there'll be a button to remove them.

Hello Carly,

Sweetheart..

Just click on this link http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/RF1

Scroll right down the page and just look for your entry, it will be the only one with an X beside it.

Click on the X and it will remove the article from Peer Review


lil xx

Hey Carley,

Now you've removed this from <./>RF1</.> (<./>PeerReview</.&gt, don't forget to submit it to <./>RF5</.> (<./>Writing-Alternative</.&gt. You do that the same way you submitted it to here, you just choose a different destination from the drop-down list. 'Tis a well-told story, and may do well there. (I'm not really qualified to comment on that, as I spend very little time there myself.)

TRiG.

Wow!

Thanks TRiG.. Just like me to only give half the information!


lil xx

I might submit it myslelf if Carley doesn't, but it's only polite to wait a while. Give her (him?) a chance to do it first.

TRiG.

Done:

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