A Conversation for Hybrid Journal Keeping
hmm it may work?
cappion-jays Started conversation Nov 17, 2005
I tried to have one hybrid journal (with sketches and some poems, also some dreams-if they were nightmarish enough)...it didnt work, though. so it dindt seem as a new idea at the begining, but after thinking a few minutes on this, i decided to give a chance.
anyway, im trying to say that it's a nice entry.
hmm it may work?
Matthew Tucker Posted Jan 13, 2006
It seems to be a nice idea, but I feel that, to be worth writing an article on it, you need to fill out what you are saying a little. It feels a bit short and unfinished - perhaps a little more humour in the first few sections and then extend what you are saying about the most important thing in the article (the discussion about the hybrid journal) - maybe fill it out with a description of the hybrid journal in practise alongside a semi-humourous/extravagent idea of what keeping a hybrid journal could lead to and then possibly a step-by-step guide on how to begin one's journal (for I know that can be a daunting prospect for any potential journal keeper) and so on... It's just an idea, but my emphasis on your need for a little humour stems from the fact that your article deals with quite a simple subject and a little more humour is far more likely to make someone interested in the idea.
Anyway, I hope that gives you something to work on.
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