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Entry: General William Tecumseh Sherman - An Enigma - A87799801
Author: Florida Sailor Visit my Club at A87794248 - U235886
I believe I will offer this one now, there are probably a few points to be improved.
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TLG (The American Civil War History Group). U515781
The primary part left in tact from the original is the section on the funeral (although I did have to add Joe Johnston' first name). I also added a footnote to explain who he was as this was the first part I added to the entry. I now mention him at several points in the text, but I am tempted to leave the footnote just because it is such an important point.
Let me first apologize - this is not a short entry; but I think the subject justifies its length. There is a great more that could be added, but I think this is enough for a Guide Entry
Any and all comments most welcome
Please feel free to sing along!
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A87799801 - General William Tecumseh Sherman - An Enigma
bobstafford Posted Jun 23, 2013
This dose not read well
The advance up the Tennessee River was interrupted by the siege of Vicksburg on the Mississippi River. The armies advanced position so deep into Southern territory meant long supply line was vulnerable to attack.
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