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Alternative Writing Workshop: A87758851 - The Water Parks Of Stoke-on-Trent
Storm Started conversation May 17, 2012
Entry: The Water Parks Of Stoke-on-Trent - A87758851
Author: Storm - U14338867
Alone in Cardiff with nothing to do but dine leisurely (it’s a hard life but somebody has to live it) I found my mind drifting to my secret hobby. I love visiting water parks and have written about them in the alternative writing workshop. I once dragged my family all the way from Bordeaux to Acheson in an attempt to visit a water park but luckily I am well served by my proximity to Stoke-On-Trent.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted May 17, 2012
Hey, this is really interesting. What a fun hobby, especially as you have a young person to share it with.
Now, I'm going to steal this for when you're all done discussing it, so I want to ask the all-important question:
Do you have a picture?
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Storm Posted May 17, 2012
Actually I do; it's all hands and feet coming off a slide. I'll find it and include.
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Bluebottle Posted May 18, 2012
My wife (then girlfriend) went to Staffordshire Uni at Stoke (1998-2001) doing Film & History (my assistant went there at the same time too, curiously enough). I must say that the waterpark there is BRILLIANT - especially the water roller coaster. I've only ever been to one other waterslide like it, which is in Basingstoke. Anyone near Staffordshire should definitely visit.
The website is: http://www.waterworld.co.uk/
Not been to the Alton Towers waterpark, though. Is that quite new?
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Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted May 18, 2012
Morning,
Waterworld is the only waterpark I have ever been to, living near to N Staffs for a few years when the children were teenagers. I had no idea it was better than others. Although my daughter did need first aid after using the Space Bowl, as she got hit in the jaw by a someone else just when falling into the water at the bottom.
I think the wave making could be made a bit more of, for the younger children who can swim, but who're frightened of the slides, or who don't want to wait in the queues? Is the heated outdoor portion available all year round? I vaguely remember it...
As Alton Towers are not in Stoke, I wonder if the title should be Waterparks of North Staffordshire?
SOT is a city independent from N Staffs, but is entirely surrounded by the county.
There is an Edited Entry on Staffordshire A53660595 that this could be linked to
I feel a bit jealous that Dmitri has nabbed this first, for the Post - as it would have made a good Edited Entry for the Guide, , although it would mean the delightful introductory first paragraph might have to be tweaked slightly.
Thanks for writing this Storm, you get the right to a Create badge
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Bluebottle Posted May 18, 2012
You can write something for both and the Edited Guide, I've done it dozens of times.
What you do have to do is make them sufficiently different so it isn't exactly the same entry. So for a version for you can be as subjective as you like, mention what You like and what You do, your family's experiences at the waterpark in as much detail as you want and give your opinions too. Then, when you write the version for Peer Review, remove the 'I's and 'We's and make it more factual in focus, and perhaps add more detail.
That way, you can have an article on the same topic with the same basic focus and structure in both and Peer Review.
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Storm Posted May 18, 2012
The water park at Alton Towers is quite new. It's part of an attempt to make it into a resort with a hotel etc.
I think Waterworld has a fairly interesting history it went bankrupt at some point.
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Storm Posted May 18, 2012
Oh and as to first aid I'm suprised the space Bowl passes the risk assesment. It feels dangerous!
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Bluebottle Posted May 18, 2012
The first time I went down a space bowl (not that one) I didn't notice it wasn't a normal slide (as I didn't have my glasses on) went down the hole in the middle head first and was a bit stunned quite deep under water, and it took a fair few seconds for me to work out which way was up. A little scary. Now I try to make sure I go feet first.
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Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted May 18, 2012
I have a relation who works at the Towers - he is a professional photographer, it may be that I can ask him nicely for a promo shot of the waterpark there.
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Bluebottle Posted May 18, 2012
Do you live in Cardiff or are you just visiting? I thought you lived in Manchester, or am I confused? And wouldn't it be quicker/nearer to go from Cardiff to Basingstoke along the M4 if you wished to visit a water slide?
http://www.basingstokeleisure.com/aquadrome/FAC_Pool
When my girlfriend lived in Stoke we used to go to the swimming pool, and then maybe have a meal at Fatty Arbuckles and then go to the Odeon for a film after. Am I imagining things, or did they have a Quasar there too?
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Storm Posted May 18, 2012
BB I’m impressed. I actually live in Birmingham but travel regularly to Cardiff,Manchester and London for work. I also go to Leeds but less often. I have cousins in the M4 corridor area and I think a trip to Basingstoke could definitely be in order.
I find the clustering of attractions such as this interesting. Birmingham has 3 Botanical gardens whilst Manchester has none.
I’m fascinated by the garden festivals. An iconic poster of my childhood was a picture of a grey prison with barred windows. At one the windows was a window box and the slogan ‘Liverpool garden Festival’.
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Bluebottle Posted May 21, 2012
I believe there are also large indoor waterparks in Blackpool, Poole and Newcastle. (I walked right past the Newcastle one when walking Hadrian's Wall, but alas couldn't go inside).
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted May 21, 2012
Storm: Could you send me that photo at:
postteamhg - at- gmail - dot-com, please?
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GregPius Posted May 25, 2012
I am going to Windermere on Monday, from my current base in London. I know what a mere is, but what water activities do they have in and around Windermere?
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Bluebottle Posted Jan 28, 2017
Entry in is here: A87759391
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Bluebottle Posted Jan 30, 2017
I still think this has Edited Guide potential...
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Alternative Writing Workshop: A87758851 - The Water Parks Of Stoke-on-Trent
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- 2: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 17, 2012)
- 3: Storm (May 17, 2012)
- 4: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 17, 2012)
- 5: Bluebottle (May 18, 2012)
- 6: Lanzababy - Guide Editor (May 18, 2012)
- 7: Bluebottle (May 18, 2012)
- 8: Storm (May 18, 2012)
- 9: Storm (May 18, 2012)
- 10: Bluebottle (May 18, 2012)
- 11: Lanzababy - Guide Editor (May 18, 2012)
- 12: Bluebottle (May 18, 2012)
- 13: Storm (May 18, 2012)
- 14: Bluebottle (May 21, 2012)
- 15: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 21, 2012)
- 16: GregPius (May 25, 2012)
- 17: Storm (May 28, 2012)
- 18: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 28, 2012)
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