A Conversation for The Village of Poling in West Sussex

Peer Review: A4087118 - The Village of Poling in West Sussex

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superjimlad

Entry: The Village of Poling in West Sussex - A4087118
Author: superjimlad - U1486306

Ok i have found out as much as i can now about Poling there isnt any more info i have spoken to lost of people and read lots this is it really unless conjecture and speculation is alowed if it is tell me.
Jim


A4087118 - The Village of Poling in West Sussex

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Conjecture and speculation..I'll get back to you on that..
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OK, Edited Guide Entries must be factual, so if you're gonna tell us (for example) a smiley - ghost story, you have to verify your source, if it was the Vicar who told you, then I'd believe him smiley - winkeye


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

This is a resubmission, superjimlad thought he had to remove the entry while he worked on the updating.

previous PR thread here:
F2119291?thread=2055666

smiley - sorrymeant to post that in post 2.

I'm going to go check the typos, and post them here, you can edit the entry while it's here, OK jim? Don't remove it from PR again, I really like this entrysmiley - ok


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

arrable farms = arable farms
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Children's Hospice = children's hospice (Do you know its name? If so, put it insmiley - smiley)
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different form of wild life may be observed
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different forms
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Doomsday book = Domesday Book (and I would link to the official site) http://www.domesdaybook.co.uk/
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Nine different ways of referring to Poling have been found in books these are Palinges in 1199, Palyng 1271, Palyngg 1279, Polynge 1305, Palynge 1341, Paling 1361, Powling 1610, Poleing 1846 and since 1715 it has been referred to as Poling

OK I'll do you the Guide-ML here as I know you have struggled with it before.

Copy & paste this:

Nine different ways of referring to Poling have been found in antiquity. These are:
Palinges in 1199
Palyng in 1271
Palyngg in 1279
Polynge in 1305
Palynge in 1341
Paling in 1361
Powling in 1610
Poleing in 1846
Since 1715 it has been referred to as Poling. The origins of the name Palinges are believed by local historians to lie in 'people or dwellers by the pal or stake' which indicates some sort of pallisade.

I'll post this as I don't want to overwhelm you smiley - smiley


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

The famous author A.A.Millne
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The famous author A A Milne
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A swan on the lake by the house was named Hopper swan by A.A.Millne and was featured in one of the Winnie the Pooh books.
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A swan on the lake by the house was named Hopper by A A Milne and featured in one of the 'Winnie the Pooh' books.
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The church is also of historical note, the location of it is perculiar
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peculiar
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it can only be reached by paths and over stiles It has the
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it can only be reached by paths and over stiles. It has the
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There is also evidence that at one time a roman road
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Roman road
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The final thing to take note of is St.Johns Priory this is now a private residence as are all of the related buildings in Poling.
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The final building of note is St John's Priory, which is now a private residence; as are all of the related buildings in Poling.
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The Priory has been added to over the centuries and now only small parts of the orrigional 13th Century Chapel can be seen.
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original
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It was used by the Knights Hospitallers of St.John of Jarusalem. This house has been enhapited by the explorer and painter Sir Harry Johnstone and he is responsible for many of the modernisations. It is said that Ghosts of Monks and Knights can be heard singing Gregorian Chants.
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It was used by the Knights Hospitallers of St John of Jerusalem. This house has been inhabited by the explorer and painter Sir Harry Johnstone and he is responsible for many of the modernisations. It is said that ghosts of monks and Knights can be heard singing Gregorian Chants.

I had to look up the Knights Hospitallers of St John of Jerusalem,
so you might do well to add this link:
http://www.newadvent.org/cathen/07477a.htm

Posting again, I'll be back to read through your updatesmiley - ok

superjimlad I really love your style of writing, it makes me smile and makes me want to read to the end.smiley - applause I hope this eventually makes it onto the front page.


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Sho - employed again!

nice entry
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Something I said wrong:

A swan on the lake by the house was named Hopper by A A Milne and featured in one of the 'Winnie the Pooh' books.

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A swan on the lake by the house was named Hopper by A A Milne and featured in one of the Winnie the Pooh books.

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Post 8

AlexAshman


This looks good smiley - ok

IMO the title should be something like 'Poling, West Sussex, UK', but I don't think it matters too much - more importantly, have a look at A1286921 - it might jog your memory and help you include something you've missed out smiley - smiley


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Post 9

superjimlad

Thanks again people you are a wonderful help i will make the changes and i will remember not to remove it lol
Thanks i will let u knwo when the changes have all been made.
Jimsmiley - ok


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Great stuff superjimladsmiley - ok


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Post 11

Natalie

A debut Entry - nice one Superjimlad! smiley - ok


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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Congratulations superjimlad!


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echomikeromeo

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Post 15

superjimlad

OMG WOW
WOOOOOOOOOOOW
I CANT BELEIVE THIS WICKED
can someone just give me a bit more detail about what i do now and whats happening?smiley - ok


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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Post 17

superjimlad

Thank you all for you help i am sooo chuffed that its in , thanks again jim


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