h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Sorry this is so long but...

Let's see...in the first section there are a few grammer errors.

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We were also known for out gloves.

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We were also known for our gloves.

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The people that if did not exist, would be main reason to why Napa would crumble.

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The people that if they did not exist, would be the main reason why Napa would crumble.

Also, might want to start a new paragraph at:

Also another thing that should need mentioning if you do want to visit this quite beautiful town,...

Just might make it flow a little better.

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Napa didn’t always have fields of grapes, no,...

I would like to delve into this paragraph at bit more in the future so...ya. Just a thought...

And in the Napa's "Spots" section under Soda Canyon Castle:

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It is a short hike of Soda Canyon Road to the left.

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It is a short hike off Soda Canyon Road to the left.

In The Ruins section:

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It tall, and easy to get up since it has stairs to the top.

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It's tall, and easy to get up since it has stairs to the top.

In the Partricks Cemetery section...

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You must pass the for deadly turns.

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You must pass the four deadly turns.

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Once you get to the end of the road their will be for paths, well, one is a dirt road, one has a gate, and one has a big wood gate.

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Once you get to the end of the road their will be three paths, well, one is a dirt road, one has a gate, and one has a big wood gate.

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One day they got loose killing him.

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One day, they got loose, killing him.

In the next section 'Things that either bug me about Napa, or peek my interest...

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Yes its a long title, but this one is even longer, get over it(but im smaller text)

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Yes its a long title, but this one is even longer, get over it (but in smaller text)

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With that, I bring to the table, metaphoricly speaking, the case of napa vs. concorts.

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With that, I bring to the table, metaphoricly speaking, the case of napa vs. concerts.

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Because they said teenagers will get drunk and stoned their.

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Because they said teenagers will get drunk and stoned there.

A little comment about the reference to footloose... I just created a simple guide entry which references back to yours about Napa. If interested the guide entry id is A4041091

Under 'Food'

Add an 'e' to the end of els in the good, the not so good, and everything els

One resturant that I can think of for you to add is Buckhorn. Don't have the info right in front of me and not sure which section you would like to put it under but ya... (Anyway, it's that one outside of Mervyn's)

Under Entertainment you might want to put in that we have Napa Bowl. True, not the most exciting place but it IS something to do. Especially since they don't just have the bowling. They also have a descent arcade (although there is usually at LEAST one machine that is broke), full bar with coin play pool tables and a juke box, as well as a blacklight room with four blacklight reactive pool tables. Play on the blacklight pool tables is either coin-play for one game for $5 for a half hour and $10 for an hour and ten minutes. A little note about the price for pool...if you are not a big fan of the pool halls like Bilco's and Napa Billiards or their prices then Napa Bowl is for you. Slightly cheaper and less yuppies...

In Parks and Recreation...

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Faily decent playground.

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Fairly decent playground.

A note on Skyline. If you are into 'Hill Bombing' ( A4041235 ) this is a REALLY great place to do it. The Westwood hills is another great place for Hill Bombing although I don't have much more info on that place...not right now at least.

In Lodging...

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I would stay in on of the small places near downtown Napa.

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I would stay in one of the small places near downtown Napa.

Well, for now I think that is it. I am sure, when I get a little more time, that I will think of some actuall content to add rather than just helping out with grammer. But anyway, take this as you will...it is your guide entry after all. Enjoy...

hahaha, thank you. saves me some time. i was really trying just to get alot of content, then going back and fixin as much as i can find. I will sy im not the best speller, but i do my best. i know their is more than you pointed out. Thank you once more.

humanman