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I guess that means I should seriously start working on the Renaissance and Baroque Entries.

Only as seriously as you want to, and only when you have time.

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A87991087 - Renaissance Architecture - Symmetry and Harmony
Good to see that you did indeed work on the Renaissance, you can subscribe to the entry above.

I did have one question to begin with, which is the final Header at the entry's end. Did you have a different title in mind rather than 'Header'?

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hi, thanks for taking this again
(Baroque arts is already in the final stages, too. I didn't start with architecture yet)

I completely forgot about that header!

I do have some characters:

'Although as a style it had already started in Italy in the 13th Century' – do you mean specifically an architectural style?

'Martin Luther initiated the division of the church' – I would suggest clarifying that this is the Protestant/Catholic divide as the Catholic/Orthodox divide had already occurred. What do you think?

architecture theory – I believe 'architectural theory' is more common.

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yes, as an architectural style

I agree with both others

I made those changes and noticed a couple more points, if I may ask?:

'The ceilings inside of buildings are also now longer made up of pointed vaults' - I assume you mean 'no longer' rather than that they are now made up of longer pointed vaults?

Also we need a better header than 'Header'.

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You are right about that of course.

I know, I'm trying to find a good one

L'état c'est moi

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That's a good idea

Would you like to have a thorough read-through and let me know what changes you'd like made?

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Looks good, thanks a lot!

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