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Peer Review: A3144917 - Is Your Horse Standing Comfortably (good boy!!!)

Post 1

dermotj

Entry: Is Your Horse Standing Comfortably (good boy!!!) - A3144917
Author: dermotj - U982283

I BREED APPALOOSA HORSES' AND THEY ARE ALL UNSHOD.NATURE IS THE ONLY WAY.


A3144917 - Is Your Horse Standing Comfortably (good boy!!!)

Post 2

I am Donald Sutherland

This reads like an advertisement and is not really suitable for the Edited Guide.

I think it wold be more at home in the Researches personal Space.

If the personal information was removed and it was fleshed out a bit with more detail, it could possible be made into an edited guide entry.

Donald


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Post 3

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

Hi Dermoti,

Welcome to h2g2 and peer review smiley - smiley

<./>Peerreview</.> is the review forum for entries wanting to be accepted for the Edited Guide. For an entry to be accepted it must meet certain guidelines which you can read here <./>writing-guidelines</.>

As it stands your entry doesn't meet them because it is more of an opinion piece. You could certainly use it as the basis for an entry, such as the benefits of unshod horses and the care of the hooves, but you would have to make it a balanced factual entry rather than an anti-shoeing one which it does read as at the moment. Perhaps you would even consider writing an entry about the horses you breed.

Have a look at the <./>frontpage</.> to see some examples of entries that have made it into the Edited Guide today.

On the other hand, your entry still makes up part of the unedited guide on h2g2 and anyone can find it by using the <./>search</.> facility. If you would like some community discussion on your points of view then a good place to post them would be in <./>askh2g2</.> or in The Forum at A1146917

If you prefer to keep the entry as it is then can you remove it from this forum by going to the peer review listing and clicking on the 'X' or 'remove' next to your entry listing.

However, if you wish to work on it, then have a read of the <./>writing-guidelines</.> remove it while you work on it and resubmit it for review smiley - ok

smiley - cheers

Mort


A3144917 - Is Your Horse Standing Comfortably (good boy!!!)

Post 4

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

Elvis alert

Back to entry, seconds please ?


A3144917 - Is Your Horse Standing Comfortably (good boy!!!)

Post 5

Spynxxx

smiley - steamI will definatly second, and do it qiuck because I STRONGLY disagree with this piece! Unresearched and misinformative, simply personal opinionsmiley - grr. Bye bye say I!


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Post 6

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

any scouts willing to second ?


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Post 7

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

seconded. I have a new Moves list (already!) so I will add it to it smiley - ok


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