A Conversation for Malibu, California, USA
Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A47749215 - Malibu, California, USA
Malibu42 Started conversation May 23, 2009
A47749215 - Malibu, California, USA
AlexAshman Posted May 23, 2009
Indeed. I see you've had an unsuccessful outing in Peer Review with this. What it needs is some structure - a series of sections with different headers such as 'attractions', 'amenities', 'accommodation', each with a bit more detail, would do the trick.
Alex 
A47749215 - Malibu, California, USA
AlexAshman Posted May 23, 2009
Oh and it's best if you remove the mention of food poisoning - unless you have proof, writing that sort of thing could be construed as libel. 
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