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marvthegrate LtG KEA

Almond shaped saphires gleam
Framed by maize coloured whisps

Expressions abound from shock to admonishment

Pale canvas is made extraordinary
With the sky blue jewels that do all the speaking

Engaging the sense with subtle changes of manner

Lithe arms hold her child dear
with minor scolding and love

A world of expression is contained with just a glimpse


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Post 2

Asteroid Lil - Offstage Presence

Nice!


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Post 3

Hypatia

Very evocative. Thanks for sharing .


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Post 4

Blue-Eyed BiPedal BookWorm from Betelgeuse (aka B4[insertpunhere])

smiley - bigeyes
"The eyes are the windows of a person's soul."

You're right, Marv, the eyes and their myriad nuances of expression communicate so much! Nice touch, beautiful imagery, wanted it to go on and on.

Bless,
B4
smiley - biggrin


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Post 5

marvthegrate LtG KEA

It may go on and on. I still have my notes that I wrote down while at the restaurant.

The genisis of this one is that I was captivated by the eyes of a girl sitting in the next booth, while I was having breakfast at my sisters restaurant. She gave me some funny looks when I asked for a pen and paper to write down some of the imagery.


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Post 6

Blue-Eyed BiPedal BookWorm from Betelgeuse (aka B4[insertpunhere])

smiley - yikes
Did you at least share your musings with her afterword?
B4uknowit
smiley - cool


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Post 7

Coniraya

That's lovely, Marv.


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Post 8

BryceColluphid

Marv., I think you should pull out the rest of your notes and work on an extended version. I used to take a small notebook around with me for thoughts, phone numbers , etc., but I was always losing the notebook. Maybe I'll try it again...


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Post 9

Mr. Cyde: The Tearer and Master of Bad Jokes.

Marv Has Feeeeeeelings.

No, Realy. Not bad at all. Impressive even.


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Post 10

marvthegrate LtG KEA

Pshaw! I am one of the more passionate people you have ever met Mr. Cyde... You just don't see it all that often.


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Post 11

Mr. Cyde: The Tearer and Master of Bad Jokes.

Oh... I'm misty eyed.


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Post 12

BryceColluphid

It's true- it's just that much of that feeling is passionate DISLIKE... negative rather than positive. ( I know Marv will skin me for this...)


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Post 13

Hypatia

Now, Bryce. Marv is just a little ...dramatic...at times. smiley - winkeye


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Post 14

Mr. Cyde: The Tearer and Master of Bad Jokes.

Here, Here!


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Post 15

marvthegrate LtG KEA

I take umbrage to that... I am not dramatic. I am outspoken in a soceity that eschews boat rocking.


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Post 16

Hypatia

drama...3a: a state, situation, or series of events involving interesting or intense conflict of forces.......dramatic...3: having a powerful voice and a declamatory style

*dances around pointing finger at Marv*


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