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EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Rudest Elf Started conversation Nov 6, 2011
Entry ID: A86879074 (Edited)
fly-pasts
On 5 March, 1936, the
Links to unedited entry. Try: A65752725 (Edited)
however, a formation
The Supermarine Southampton, the first aircraft to fly from Britain to Australia and Hong Kong, was designed by RJ Mitchell and built in 1925.
Flying boat services
To commemorate its connections with both Spitfires>
short-wing Albatross
Older than the Albatross, the Goose, a twin-engined flying boat designed as a six-seat commuter aircraft, was first built in 1937.
spraying insecticides, and aerial photography.
< flies, or hovers, over the waves, > flies or hovers over the waves,
firefighting
Similarly, two Russian
intended to visit
never seen / never shown ?
firebombers
Fly-pasts and Air Displays
the fly-past of
Fly-Pasts and Air Displays
fly-pasts taking
and was able to
Blackburn Aircraft Company.
long-range
was designed to replace
Nevada12. It was purchased by PJ Morgan Aviation and returned to Southampton in 1997.
take-off
and served
air-to-air combat.
Wings 2000, the
is a group
a refuelling probe was added
and to carry
team, The Red Arrows, has
< It was intended for use in the Cold War; however they saw service in the 1991 Gulf War.> The Jaguar GR3 was intended for use in the Cold War, however, they saw service as recently as the 1991 Gulf War. ?
Victoria Cross, for
On 16 August, 1940
badly injured
he was almost blinded
pierced his eye ?
although, as a result
aircraft, he sustained
legs. He then bailed
a pub.
Fortunately, by
Nicholson
Cross. He died
Royal Air Force Museum in Hendon, North London. ?
2000 event, a publicity
27 July, 1998
was a company
have taken place
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 7, 2011
Thanks, Elf.
I've done those all except:
and to carry -- the sense wasn't quite right here and I changed it to:
a refuelling probe was added, to allow it to stay airborne for up to 16 hours, and it carried defensive air-to-air missiles.
who was on the way home from the pub - I think "the pub" is the normal phrase and will be understood by the reader.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Nov 7, 2011
you steamed through those Gnomon. I need to find out more about your edit tools.
Thanks for proof reading rudest elf - what would we do without you?
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 7, 2011
I don't use any special editing tools for those: just two windows, one with the list of changes and the other with the editing window.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Rudest Elf Posted Nov 8, 2011
Thanks, Gnomon.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 8, 2011
Just bounce them, and a curator may come along.
The curators are the polishers.
By the way, you don't need wsogmm at the start of the addreses. Just h2g2.com will do.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Rudest Elf Posted Nov 8, 2011
Duly bounced.
"The curators are the polishers." I was under the impression that the curators respond to queries raised by Researchers, rather than systematically scouring Entries themselves. I guess they must make a lot of changes (both factual & typographical) that don't go through the EF system. One thing's for sure - there is plenty of work to be done, and too few are doing it.
"you don't need wsogmm at the start of the addreses." I just C & P'd the address from the Entries.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 8, 2011
You don't need wsogmm anywhere.
Some curators like to respond to queries in Editorial Feedback. Others like to find things to do themselves.
The formerly most active curator by far has now moved on to being a Guide Editor.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 8, 2011
Changes that curators make which are not in response to Editorial Feedback are reported at the Curators' Page.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Rudest Elf Posted Nov 8, 2011
Yes, it's clear that the Curators do important work. However, they don't appear to go through Edited Entries systematically.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 8, 2011
Galaxy Babe and I used to, but we've both been busy recently.
EF: Sea Wings 2000 - A Unique Airshow
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Nov 10, 2011
I still do
I am also trawling EF on the days I am at home, so there's no need to articles.
GB
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