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Entry: Zak's Ransom: Hot and Sour "Duck Free" Soup, with Sesame "Duck Substitute" Noodles - A951635
Author: Croz- Oh No, Zak's been Ducknapped!!!! Read ThePost for further details! - U96736

Free Zak!

Here's a recipe for all you duck lovers out there

While this may be in Peer Review in order to free the duck, you'll have to remove all the references to duck from it before it is suitable for the Edited Guide. You can probably leave "Zak's Ransom" in the title, as the sub-ed will remove it later.

Are there any comments at all?

Hi Croz! I'd say this entry just got forgotten. There's a lot in Peer Review at the moment and it is easy for things to get buried. (One of my Excellent Entries has gone for weeks without any comments ).

It's hard to judge a recipe. There's a list of ingredients and a method, but not much to indicate what the final dish is like. Perhaps you could add a little introduction, saying how mouthwateringly delicious this is.

Cheers Gnomon, I'll stick that in when I get home from work as well as get on with some Peer Review sifting and shifting.

In my opinion, the two "Method" sections would look better as bulleted lists.

RhoMuNuQ

Hey Soylent,
I too yearn for a more descriptive recipe. A nice paragraph intro would suffice. Perhaps describe what kind of meal into which this soup might fit.

Friar

Please can you add that introductory paragraph? Think of Zak!

RhoMuNuQ

I've thought of Zak and I really wonder whether he's worth the fuss with all the trouble he's caused me over the past month. I'm not in the frame of mind to continue this entry at the moment so I'm pulling it out of Peer Review.

In fact the ransom entries are no longer needed as Zak made a break for freedom and escaped a few days ago.

Well, that's good news

I hope Mina didn't traumatise him too much...

RhoMuNuQ