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Post 21

Researcher 177704

Excellent entry smiley - ok

"However his family returned to the United Kingdom when he was four buying a farm in Northern Ireland. However for his secondary schooling he was sent to Bedford School where his inherited Northern Irish accent earned him his lifelong nickname 'Paddy'."

Too many 'howevers', I think.

Perhaps you could mention how many seats the Lib Dems held when Ashdown came to power in 1988, and how many they'd gained by the 1997 election. This would be an indicator of Paddy's success as a leader.

smiley - rocket


A893568 - Paddy Ashdown, Liberal Democrat Party (UK) Leader

Post 22

Demon Drawer

OK have done most of it. Need to look up some facts on Jane, Kate and Simon though.


A893568 - Paddy Ashdown, Liberal Democrat Party (UK) Leader

Post 23

summerbayexile

Hi DD,
Superb entry on my favourite party leader.smiley - cheers Two minor points. In the paragraph referring to HK it should be 'ensuring' not 'insuring' unless he was working for Scottish Widows.smiley - laugh Second sentence in the paragraph on Bosnia should start 'Here' not 'Where' as the former makes more sense. Great job.
sbe


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Post 24

Demon Drawer

Cheers SBE

corrections made.


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J

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

smiley - cheerssmiley - ok

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summerbayexile

Hi DD,
I'm an official scout now, having got through the initiation test of picking one of your entriessmiley - laughsmiley - winkeye in my first batch no less. Thanks for making my job really easy.smiley - cheers
Well done
sbe


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Demon Drawer

Yay!!!


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Pongo

Congrats!

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Cyzaki

Congrats! smiley - bubbly

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