A Conversation for Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two)

Peer Review: A881723 - Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two)

Post 1

Saturnine

Entry: Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two) - A881723
Author: Saturnine : slipping down the spiral. - U189219

This is the accompanying part to "Antichrist Superstar - The Album"...my first attempt at Edited Status, so please be kind!

In order to keep things simple, could you please post comments in the thread of Part One...?

Thankyou!


A881723 - Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two)

Post 2

Smij - Formerly Jimster

All seems very good at first glance, Saturnine. Only comment I'd make at this stage is it's probably unnecessary to split this in two; it'll work just as well as a single entry.

But congrats on your first entry to Peer Review. Hope it won't be the last! smiley - bubbly

Jimster


A881723 - Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two)

Post 3

Saturnine

Thing is, as I've explained in the thread for (Part One)...I'm accessing this site through Telewest, and therefore I'm working with limited memory. There's no *need* for it to be in two parts, but unfortunately, that's the platform I'm working on. Not my choice - just the limitations of the old digi-box! I'm perfectly happy for it to be edited into one whole for conveinience!

Thankyou for the compliment too! smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Saturnine

This *should* have been taken off Peer Review with (Part One) to be edited... smiley - erm

smiley - huh


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Post 5

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Well, since it hasn't- if you click on the 'remove' button, which you'll be able to see on the entry, you could tidy PR yourself smiley - winkeye

smiley - ale


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Post 6

Saturnine

Where's the remove button, dear KerrAvon? On plain skin, and I cannot see it for the life of me...


A881723 - Antichrist Superstar - The Album (Part Two)

Post 7

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Bugger, sorry, I told you the wrong palce to find it smiley - doh It's actually on the Peer Review page, if you look to the right, next to your entry past all the 'last posting' and 'posted by' guffins.

smiley - ale


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Post 8

Saturnine

Ahhhhh...I see!

BTW - don't you mean *gubbins* my dear?

smiley - laugh


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Post 9

Saturnine

Yaargh. B*****ks. That has to be one of the buttons that doesn't work for me...stupid hacking...

Will just wait for the genius if a subeditor that is *supposed* to be editing this to get it removed...


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Post 10

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Guffins sounds fine to me- sort of guff crossed with gubbins smiley - winkeye I'll post something to the Scout's egroup for you to get it moved.

smiley - ale


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Post 11

Saturnine

Thanks honey! smiley - smiley


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