h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Writing went better today. I decided to give a voice to Henri, Michel's elder brother. The story was supposed to trace the results of their falling out over Danielle, but it hasn't really done that.
I'll have to go back and fill in some earlier scenes with Henri but when I do that I don't know.
Anyway, I wrote 1906 words, which is nearly two hundred word more than usual.

Wow - well done

I see you're a day ahead of schedule now

Good luck with going back and adding more text to existing scenes. When I did that in 2012, I found it worked really well as it was a few days since I had written it, so fresh eyes saw places where more information was needed, and places where more detailed descriptions would enhance it, and I hope you find the same

Thanks Sasha.