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Peer Review: A87847384 - The Dolmabahce Palace, Istanbul, Turkey

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Gnomon - time to move on

Entry: The Dolmabahce Palace, Istanbul, Turkey - A87847384
Author: Gnomon - U151503

OK, I've figured out how to get this one past the Captcha censor, so I'm putting it back into Peer Review.


A87847384 - The Dolmabahce Palace, Istanbul, Turkey

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

Previous Peer Review conversation: F22144394?thread=8313083


A87847384 - The Dolmabahce Palace, Istanbul, Turkey

Post 3

Recumbentman

Well you are enviably determined! You seem like a postman working out ways to get letters into a letterbox despite the attentions of a snapping dog.


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Post 4

minorvogonpoet

This is well-written and interesting.smiley - smiley

I'm not sure it would make me want to go there, though. I want to know about the Topkapi palace instead.


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Post 5

Gnomon - time to move on

The Topkapi palace is well worth a visit. It's described in the Top 14 Sights of Istanbul entry.


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Post 6

You can call me TC

A very straightforward and helpful description about something most people will not have heard of. Maybe you could clarify that it was the Ottoman empire that Ataturk and his chums threw over. This is mentioned earlier, but it may not be obvious to eveyone.

There is ab 'l' missing in 'should' towards the end.


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Post 7

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks TC. Fixed.


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Post 8

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

A good Entry, helpful and informative. smiley - smiley

In the sections about the three parts of the buildings, where you talk about the ceremonial hall I'd add a link to your Entry about Greek temples. Or add a footnote to explain what Corinthian is.
I've never heard 'trompe l'oeuil' before, but maybe it's common knowledge in English.


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Post 9

Gnomon - time to move on

I would have thought "trompe l'oeuil" is a well-known term in English.


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Post 10

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

ok smiley - smiley I really don't know, just thought I'd mention it.


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Post 11

Gnomon - time to move on

I see that I've misspelt it. It should not have a 'u' in it.


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Post 12

Gnomon - time to move on

I've added a footnote explaining Corinthian columns, and have put a link in that footnote to the Greek Temples entry.


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