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Bluebottle

Entry: The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004 - A87766249
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

A Flea Market Rescue - the original is:
A776568 The Sonic The hedgehog series,spin offs and secrets by Jenny_Tablina - U197495

As the original was quite long, I split it in half and this is the second half. The first half is:
The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: The 1990s - A87765646

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h2g2 Guide Editors

Please could we have some comments on this Flea Market rescue? Thank you in anticipation smiley - smiley

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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

On the morrow.

I'm still playing some these games again smiley - winkeye


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h2g2 Guide Editors

smiley - okthank you Magwitchsmiley - biggrin


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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Finally got around to this.

Just been playing Sonic 2 on Xbox 360 from Sega Dreamcast Collection. I wouldn't suggest playing any of the others. Bass Fishing, anyone? smiley - winkeye I least I now know where Ulala comes from (Space Channel 5 if anyone's interested).

A couple of minor typos, not much else.

However, think this might sound better:

smiley - biroEach character has either a Speed, Power or Flight special ability, with one of each in each team.

as
smiley - orib
Each character in the team has a special ability - Speed, Power or Flight

Under the Sonic Heroes Header.




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Bluebottle

Corrected - thanks Magwitch.

Where are the typos you spotted?

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h2g2 Guide Editors

Are we all done here? smiley - smiley

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Bluebottle

I think so. smiley - smiley

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SashaQ - happysad

Hello Bluebottle smiley - bigeyes

I read this, and spotted a few points for your consideration...

In the Sonic Adventure section, the sentence including 'Big to catch his friend Froggy' is strange.

In the sentence starting 'The endings are different', I was slightly confused - are Tails' and Sonic's endings counted as different or the same?

Talking about Super Sonic, the sentence 'his simply consisted...' - his game?

Who is resealed in the emerald?

It looked odd to call the 'Chao's a 'system'. It was also not clear to me whether they die

In the Sonic Advance section, what's 'neo-geo'?

In the Sonic Advance 2 section, the 'The special stage' paragraph needs some clarification

In the Sega Superstars section, what is 'eye-toy'?

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Bluebottle

Thanks SashaQ again for your highly detailed comments – I've had a read through and reworded the sections that you've highlighted and also added an EyeToy explanation too.

Let me know if you think it makes more sense.

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SashaQ - happysad

Thanks Bluebottle - that's great! smiley - ok


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Bluebottle

smiley - applauseWell done Jenny_Tablina!

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