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Bluebottle Started conversation Oct 9, 2012
Entry: The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004 - A87766249
Author: Bluebottle - U43530
A Flea Market Rescue - the original is:
A776568 The Sonic The hedgehog series,spin offs and secrets by Jenny_Tablina - U197495
As the original was quite long, I split it in half and this is the second half. The first half is:
The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: The 1990s - A87765646
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h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Feb 1, 2013
A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Feb 1, 2013
A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Feb 1, 2013
A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Feb 5, 2013
Finally got around to this.
Just been playing Sonic 2 on Xbox 360 from Sega Dreamcast Collection. I wouldn't suggest playing any of the others. Bass Fishing, anyone? I least I now know where Ulala comes from (Space Channel 5 if anyone's interested).
A couple of minor typos, not much else.
However, think this might sound better:
Each character has either a Speed, Power or Flight special ability, with one of each in each team.
as
Each character in the team has a special ability - Speed, Power or Flight
Under the Sonic Heroes Header.
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Bluebottle Posted Feb 5, 2013
Corrected - thanks Magwitch.
Where are the typos you spotted?
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h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Jun 18, 2013
A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
SashaQ - happysad Posted Jun 18, 2013
Hello Bluebottle
I read this, and spotted a few points for your consideration...
In the Sonic Adventure section, the sentence including 'Big to catch his friend Froggy' is strange.
In the sentence starting 'The endings are different', I was slightly confused - are Tails' and Sonic's endings counted as different or the same?
Talking about Super Sonic, the sentence 'his simply consisted...' - his game?
Who is resealed in the emerald?
It looked odd to call the 'Chao's a 'system'. It was also not clear to me whether they die
In the Sonic Advance section, what's 'neo-geo'?
In the Sonic Advance 2 section, the 'The special stage' paragraph needs some clarification
In the Sega Superstars section, what is 'eye-toy'?
A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
Bluebottle Posted Jun 19, 2013
Thanks SashaQ again for your highly detailed comments – I've had a read through and reworded the sections that you've highlighted and also added an EyeToy explanation too.
Let me know if you think it makes more sense.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jun 19, 2013
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Peer Review: A87766249 - The Sonic the Hedgehog Series and Spin-offs: 2000-2004
- 1: Bluebottle (Oct 9, 2012)
- 2: h2g2 Guide Editors (Feb 1, 2013)
- 3: Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. (Feb 1, 2013)
- 4: h2g2 Guide Editors (Feb 1, 2013)
- 5: Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. (Feb 5, 2013)
- 6: Bluebottle (Feb 5, 2013)
- 7: h2g2 Guide Editors (Jun 18, 2013)
- 8: Bluebottle (Jun 18, 2013)
- 9: SashaQ - happysad (Jun 18, 2013)
- 10: Bluebottle (Jun 19, 2013)
- 11: SashaQ - happysad (Jun 19, 2013)
- 12: h2g2 auto-messages (Jun 27, 2013)
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