h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Aass Brewery - A854714
Author: Klatti - U205763

This is my first try on making a a entry for the guide.
I greatfull for any comments or suggestions regarding this entry.
Klatti.

Hi there Klatti!

I imagine that you (like me) aren't a native English speaker so let's better leave the grammar to the SubEd. This is a nice entry and IMHO there's three things left to do with it:

1) check for typos. You can copy the source text into Word or some other word processor and run a spell check on it, then copy the text back into Notepad and post it. (If you copy directly from WinWord, you'll see ugly things being done to apostrophes etc, so you better don't do that)

2) clarify that Norway isn't bound by Bavarian Middle-Age legislation but that customers prefer beer being brewed that way You can also link to A593697 which has some more details on that law.

3) remove it from the Workshop (there's a 'remove' link down in the list at <./>RF2</.> and put it into PeerReview



Bossel

Thanks a million for your suggestions.

I have put it up for PeerReview now. (a bit scared of doing that since it's the first time)
Klatti