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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 1

havaco

Entry: Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System - A8401501
Author: havaco - U2913929

Here is my finished piece of artwork on Emotions. Please tell me what you think and how could I improve it?


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 2

echomikeromeo

Please don't take this the wrong way, havaco, but it seems to me that this might be a bit simplistic. We all know that we have emotions and what they stem from - for example, when a friend has a cool new piece of electronic equipment that we really want, we're likely to be jealous.

Maybe you could expand on the medical aspect, hormones, that sort of thing. I would find information on how emotions are all down to specific combinations of chemicals very interesting.smiley - smiley


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 3

Not him

smiley - book


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 4

havaco

Most people don't really think about what emotions do. I have something to add to it.


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 5

Spiff


But what about 'tickle'?

You touch in this sensitive subject, but don't really 'tackle' it!

Surely one of the great emotions?


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 6

havaco

Not even I don't understand that.


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 7

Spiff


"There are Jealous, Anger, Happiness, Love, Fear, Pain, Tickle, and many many more emotions."

Well, after that, you didn't really reveal the nature of that ticklish emotion... pray tell!


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 8

havaco

I know nothing of it. Anyone want to tell?


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 9

Not him

The urge to laugh, frequently coupled with loss of muscular control, resulting in exhaustion over time.


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 10

AlexAshman


Author has elvised, and this Entry is too simplistic to warrant a place in the Edited Guide - time to remove it from the Writing Workshop...


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 11

AlexAshman


This Entry has been seconded (F43882?thread=3835955) and has been added to a list of Writing Workshop removals. The Entry will hopefully be removed shortly.


A8401501 - Emotions - The Body's Acknolegment System

Post 12

AlexAshman


Ok, the Entry has now left the EGWW.

*unsubscribes*


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