A Conversation for Talking Point: National Poetry Day
Guess what I'm celebrating...
Mina Started conversation Oct 9, 2002
Him
bemused charm is something unthought
laughter trapped here in my naked love
hot desire suddenly
his smile the world
Guess what I'm celebrating...
Demon Drawer Posted Oct 9, 2002
Hmmm. Looking at the prose above I guess your celebrating having sex.
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Mina Posted Oct 9, 2002
You're right about the sex, but prose? It's a poem! Well, it was supposed to be a poem. It's the only piece of poetry that I've ever written, so I'm not really sure how poetry is supposed to work.
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Demon Drawer Posted Oct 9, 2002
Well I've written quite a bit been at it since I was 13 or so, and this looks great for me.
Why has no more been writ?
This possesses soul and wit.
Something boding deep inside
Can erupt in prose with pride.
Cast your cares behind the pen
Relive emmotions way back when
That's the poets fear and joy.
Words are the tools we employ.
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maxharley Posted Oct 10, 2002
I liked it, Mina! It may not be rhyming verse, but it works.
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Demon Drawer Posted Oct 10, 2002
Cheers Mina, Linz liked it to and she got her own poem to appreciate as well.
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