A Conversation for The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Writing Workshop: A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Post 1

the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448)

Entry: The motto "Go you big red fire engine!" - A811586
Author: the_league_against_helium (2+0!)*(0!+8+4+0!)=42 - U200840

Hi folks,
I thought I'd drop this in to see if anyone has any ideas to add to it. It seems a bit flat to me but I can't remember much more than that. Also I just want everyone to know about it! smiley - biggrin


A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Post 2

Spiff


Cool! I love it!

"GO YOU BIG RED FIRE ENGINE!"

I never heard about this at the time, so a big THANKYOU for keeping me informed.

Are you familiar with 'Shout "Gouranga!"; be happy!'

similar principle preached by Hari-Krishna monks: I'm not into the chanting and orange duds, but i can't deny a certain uplifting feeling i get when i shout Gouranga with all the enthusiasm in can muster.

anyways, you planning to got into pr with this? "Why not?", I say. smiley - biggrin


A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Post 3

the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448)

Hey mr. spiff.

Thanks for the comment - nice to know it's not just me that thinks it's funny.

I'm not Mr. PR, and I'm resoundingly not Mr. Self-Help Book (those things really get my hackles up). However I have to admit that saying "Go you big red fire engine!" out loud when I'm stressed does ease the tension a bit (I have - I'm embarrassed to say - actually done this). Mostly I just think it's a good story.

Any suggestions for revision?

Cheers! smiley - cheers


A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Post 4

GTBacchus

Well, this entry is lovely! smiley - biggrin "The power of stupidity and optimism over reality." Wow.

I agree with Spiff that the entry is basically complete and ready for Peer Review. It won't get a terrible lot of attention here in Writing Workshop, you see, but since it's not blatantly a 'work in progress', you could pull it out of the Workshop and submit it to Peer Review, where everyone and their dog will see it. Probably get a lot more feedback there.

In other words.... GO, YOU BIG RED FIRE ENGINE!!!

smiley - cheers
GTB


A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"

Post 5

the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448)

Thanks GTBBacchus!

OK, OK, I'll nudge it into peer review. I haven't written much since I joined a couple of weeks ago, so I don't have a handle on which fora people actually read. Nice to get a reply!

Please mosey on over to peer review and lavish your sub-ed attentions on it, if you like.

Cheers! smiley - biggrin


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