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Writing Workshop: A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"
the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448) Started conversation Aug 25, 2002
Entry: The motto "Go you big red fire engine!" - A811586
Author: the_league_against_helium (2+0!)*(0!+8+4+0!)=42 - U200840
Hi folks,
I thought I'd drop this in to see if anyone has any ideas to add to it. It seems a bit flat to me but I can't remember much more than that. Also I just want everyone to know about it!
A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"
Spiff Posted Aug 30, 2002
Cool! I love it!
"GO YOU BIG RED FIRE ENGINE!"
I never heard about this at the time, so a big THANKYOU for keeping me informed.
Are you familiar with 'Shout "Gouranga!"; be happy!'
similar principle preached by Hari-Krishna monks: I'm not into the chanting and orange duds, but i can't deny a certain uplifting feeling i get when i shout Gouranga with all the enthusiasm in can muster.
anyways, you planning to got into pr with this? "Why not?", I say.
A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"
the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448) Posted Aug 30, 2002
Hey mr. spiff.
Thanks for the comment - nice to know it's not just me that thinks it's funny.
I'm not Mr. PR, and I'm resoundingly not Mr. Self-Help Book (those things really get my hackles up). However I have to admit that saying "Go you big red fire engine!" out loud when I'm stressed does ease the tension a bit (I have - I'm embarrassed to say - actually done this). Mostly I just think it's a good story.
Any suggestions for revision?
Cheers!
A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"
GTBacchus Posted Sep 1, 2002
Well, this entry is lovely! "The power of stupidity and optimism over reality." Wow.
I agree with Spiff that the entry is basically complete and ready for Peer Review. It won't get a terrible lot of attention here in Writing Workshop, you see, but since it's not blatantly a 'work in progress', you could pull it out of the Workshop and submit it to Peer Review, where everyone and their dog will see it. Probably get a lot more feedback there.
In other words.... GO, YOU BIG RED FIRE ENGINE!!!
GTB
A811586 - The motto "Go you big red fire engine!"
the_league_against_helium (see A816996 and A823448) Posted Sep 1, 2002
Thanks GTBBacchus!
OK, OK, I'll nudge it into peer review. I haven't written much since I joined a couple of weeks ago, so I don't have a handle on which fora people actually read. Nice to get a reply!
Please mosey on over to peer review and lavish your sub-ed attentions on it, if you like.
Cheers!
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