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Entry: Warcraft- the history of the best-selling game serie - A792065
Author: Loui Da Boss The Keeper of Contradicting Thoughts - U170644

I play this game this is the VERY best review i have seen on the game/Franchise since i started playing two years ago :D

Wow, it's quiet in the Writing Workshop at the moment. I've had a glance through and it's not bad, but I'm afraid you're going to fall foul of the writing guidelines (A53209) for the bits you've done in the first person. It's an interesting and well written article, but have a few slips of English, notably the word should be "series" not "serie". I would also suggest adding some headings and removing the lists of awards - mentioning a couple of the prestigious ones is reasonable but big lists like this aren't necessary.

Another point of style is don't use tags like that. You should enclose paragraphs in and most lists you include should have lines spaced close together.

If you're definitely planning to get this into the Edited Guide I could go through it in more detail. Hope this helps.

Over a year since the author has posted, propose a move to the Flea Market for this Entry

Matt

Seconded.