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Giford Started conversation Jul 8, 2002
Entry: Internal Frame Backpacks: A User's Guide - A781689
Author: Giford - U187177
Bags of info on bags!
Gif 
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 8, 2002
Excellent piece Gif - well written and informative, and if there were any typos, I missed them. Gets my 
for the Guide 
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Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted Jul 8, 2002
Yes, I agree, except that if your shoulders rise on breathing, you're not breathing properly! However, as most people breath from the top of their lungs and don't use the full capacity .... I suppose I can't really quibble.
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 8, 2002
*Heads off to the bathroom in the knowledge that he breathes properly because he learnt to play a brass instrument at school and has breathed from the diaphragm ever since*
Well, I stood in front of the mirror, and even when I deliberately breathed *only* from my diaphragm, my shoulders did still rise a little until I consciously made an effort to hold them down 
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jul 17, 2002
Great piece Giford!
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Giford Posted Jul 18, 2002
Ta Bossel.
Still waiting patiently here ...
Gif
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Danny B Posted Jul 29, 2002
Hi Giford
I'm in the process of subediting your entry - it's at A789311 if you want to pop over and see what I'm up to (which isn't much, to be honest )
Danny B.
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Giford Posted Jul 29, 2002
Cheers Danny. I can't spot the changes you've made - which is what I look for in an editor 
One thing though - it looks like I've put 'You should now be able to run and jump freely without the bag moving.' Hmm, that's what happens if you forget to pick the bag up, isn't it? Please replace it with 'The bag should now follow your movements if you run or jump, without hindering you by moving against your body.' or somesuch.
Ta.
Gif
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Danny B Posted Jul 29, 2002
Glad you approve It's always nice to get an article that doesn't need much editing
I've changed the sentence you mentioned - anything else before I send it off to the Towers?
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jul 29, 2002
Breaking the speed records, eh? 
How about having a short break and enjoy some 
?
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Peer Review: A781689 - Internal Frame Backpacks: A User's Guide
- 1: Giford (Jul 8, 2002)
- 2: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 8, 2002)
- 3: Zarquon's Singing Fish! (Jul 8, 2002)
- 4: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 8, 2002)
- 5: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jul 17, 2002)
- 6: Giford (Jul 18, 2002)
- 7: h2g2 auto-messages (Jul 18, 2002)
- 8: Danny B (Jul 29, 2002)
- 9: Giford (Jul 29, 2002)
- 10: Danny B (Jul 29, 2002)
- 11: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jul 29, 2002)
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