h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Wavefinder Digital Radio Receiver - A763265
Author: Whoami? (offline until Thursday) - U177581

OK. Let's see how this does!

Four weeks and no response

Ok, here goes...

First paragraph
The way you use the past tense "was the cheapest way to access DAB digital radio" makes me ask, ok, so why bother with it, why not get the modern version?

Why not try "is, at the time of writing, the cheapest way...



Para 2
An translucent = a translucent

You connect it to the computer by USB
what about
You connect it to a computer using a USB port (with a footnote explaining USB)

Apart from that, this definitely shouldn't have been sat at the bottom of PR so this is a darned good excuse to bump it back up again

whisky

Thanks! I'll go make changes!

*smiles in a sort of evil way*

Whoami?

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

Wasn't me!
But does this count as the shortest ever PR thread


congratulations anyway

Let's hope subediting goes as smoothly

The edited article is at A789302 if you want to have a look before I send it back.



Danny B.

No problem. Thanks. I am typing from a web terminal at a campsite in sunny France! Great of you to have asked - and what a good job you've made of it. Send it in when it's convenient!

Whoami?
Not tanned - only a little burnt.

Glad you approve

Enjoy your holiday (I won't refer you to my article on sensible sun exposure )