A Conversation for Miles City, Montana, USA
A734744 - Miles City, MT, USA
Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted May 4, 2002
Hello Noble,
Neat entry.
Can I suggest that you put Montana in full in the title, as those not from the US will not know the abbreviation.
I've another couple of comments - nothing drastic.
Anything to add on Fort Keogh - I notice it has an Irish name?
It was names > It was named
It might be nice to say a bit more about the Nez Perces tribe. When was the battle of Bear Paws and why was it called that.
Agricultural experiments 
- does that mean GM crops?
Couple of typos:
destroy > destroyed
loose > lose, although the sentence -
'This robbed the town of some of the historic atmosphere that they have not made much attempt to replace. Basically they are not going to change, while they loose what they have.'
might be better as 'Therefore the historic aspect of the town is being lost.' or something like that.
A734744 - Miles City, MT, USA
Ashley Posted Jun 10, 2002
Hey Noble,
This is a great entry on a place I have never heard of but would now like to pay a visit to. 
You've made the changes suggested by ZSF, and the only thing I have to add is the format of dates (eg, 6 June, 1973). It is a minor tweak and shouldn't stop this entry from being Scouted.
Thanks for a great read. 
A734744 - Miles City, MT, USA
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jun 12, 2002
There's an 'else where' towards the bottom which should read 'elsewhere' and all else that it requires to go into the Guide is a certain 'click'...
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done! 
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jun 16, 2002
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Danny B Posted Jun 20, 2002
It has now been subedited and is at A767261 if you want to have a look before I send it back to the Towers.
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