A Conversation for How to Make a Pingu from Fimo

Peer Review: A724420 - How to Make a Pingu from Fimo

Post 1

Ashley

Entry: How to Make a Pingu from Fimo - A724420
Author: Ashley - U276


How to make your favourite flippered friend from Fimo...

aark!

smiley - smiley


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Post 2

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hi Ashley!smiley - smooch

Bwa Bwwwwwwaaaaarkkkkkkkk!!!!

Not only does he grow very tall, but his beak extends when he shouts...smiley - bigeyes

Very good, Ashleysmiley - loveblush

I noticed just one spelling mistake, "riduculed" should be ridiculed.

Other than that, it's perfect.
smiley - wow

And thank you for putting the Pingu theme tune into my head for the rest of the day....

My son has all the videos by the way....smiley - winkeye

The best bit EVER was when Pingu was desperate for the loo and he peed on the ice and it turned yellow. My daughter hfh
U181262
fell off her chair laughing!

~AGB~
smiley - flyhi


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Post 3

caper_plip

Brilliant!

Can you make a Pinga from Fimo too? Pingu needs his little sister!

Great Entry!

Caper Plipsmiley - magic


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Post 4

Ashley


I've made the changes - I saw the 'Best of Pingu' video the other day and was falling off my chair with laughter. Seriously funny with sinister undertones... smiley - smiley


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Post 5

Demon Drawer

Sinister undertones in Pingu. I must have missed something!

Great entry by the way!!! smiley - winkeye

Obviously need to get writing as the italics are taking over Peer Review


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Post 6

Abi

It is a mighty entry Smashley, just one thing I noticed...

In the section entitled the head, it reads 'a rather large Malteser of an excessively lame brussel sprout'

Should that 'of' be 'or'?


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Post 7

Demon Drawer

No aren't Malteses the chocolate with the Brussel Sprout centre


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Post 8

Ashley


Oooh well spotted my little treasure...

*waves smiley - fairy wand*

Should be fixed now. smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Ashley!

An interesting entry.

I think the title should be "How to Make a Pingu from Modelling Clay".

Move the link to "stop-motion animation" to the first occurrence of this phrase.

Do you really have to say "fayre" instead of "fare"?

"an everyday mouse" - is this a computer mouse or a cheese-eating rodent?

"flat-bottomed ellipsis" should be "flat-bottomed ellipse"

Your description of the head is odd. I would consider 2.5 cm as quite a respectable size for a brussel sprout and enormous for a Malteser. Something is wrong here.

You raise the hopes of miserly readers by listing "half a toothpick" in the ingredients, only to disappoint them later when you admit that in fact an entire toothpick is required.

Your description of attaching the head to the body needs to be rewritten, so that it mentions the head, rather than just the toothpick.



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Post 10

Ashley

Gnomon

You're a star - thank you! smiley - smiley

I've made most of the changes you suggest. I've left the title as is because Fimo is ideal as it doesn't crumble and can be handled more than clay.

And Fayre was a typo on my behalf smiley - blush

I will learn to type... honest.


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Post 11

Jimi X

Bizarre.

Well-crafted.

But very, very odd.

smiley - cheers

- X


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Post 12

happyfacehelen - Keeper of Cheshire Cat Grins and Holding Hands

Hiya Ashley! smiley - biggrin

Did i hear pingu mentioned???
ahh i see i did, what a wonderful entry! My Girlfriend just made me a fimo penguin the other day! smiley - smooch
Thank you for your penguin recognition, i have what has to be the largest collection of penguin stuff in the UK!! smiley - winkeye

See you round the starts! smiley - magic

smiley - hug

hfh, daughter of Galaxy babe. xxx


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Post 13

Ashley


Hey HFH,

Penguins do rule smiley - smiley

Have fun, have a great weekend and give your mum a hug from me! smiley - smiley


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Post 14

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Congrats -- this one has been accepted -- you know the drill.

smiley - winkeye
Mikey


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Post 15

Gnomon - time to move on

Well done, Ashley! smiley - bubbly Michelangelo, watch out! A new sculptor has entered the scene.


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Post 16

Ashley


Thank y'all kindly... smiley - cheers


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Post 17

Abi

Ashley, Charles Saatchi called for you. Said he loved your surrealist take on antarctic wildlife and would like to buy all your work. smiley - winkeye


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Post 18

Ashley



Bwaark!


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