A Conversation for The Broadmoor Siren [Peer Review version]
The Siren
Wilma Neanderthal Started conversation Nov 26, 2005
Amazing - I had no idea! Thank you, this is a very informative piece. The only suggestion I ould possibly have is a very little picky one:
"Escapes from Broadmoor have been thankfully very rare"
I think this would read better as:
Thankfully, escapes from Broadmoor have been very rare
Wilma
The Siren
aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Nov 27, 2005
I thought that Wilma, but understandably, wasn't sure, so wouldn't have mentioned it.
Fascinating entry Icy, would you please tell me when you write your next one? It was by mere chance that I found this. 
The Siren
aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Nov 27, 2005
As I said, I wouldn't have mentioned it if it ´hadn't been for Wilma, I'm hardly ever very sure about 'corrections', it's more what I feel, not what I 'know'
Why didn't you tell me ? I hardly ever browse through peer review, and would nearly have missed this brilliant entry
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