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Whisky

You know you're an H2G2 addict when you understand what
“ and ” mean smiley - winkeye



Oops sowwy, wrong thread smiley - laugh


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Whisky

Just one more serious point now.

We can tell you're American Wizzard - but for us poor ignorant brits, could you add

ATM - Automatic Cash Dispenser after your ATM comment.

smiley - cheers
whisky


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The Wizzard, Keeper of Words and the Space Bar

In reply to Spiffs hypothesis smiley - smiley, Aerofloat is Russian, yes, and probably quite profitable.

This was pretty much my final rewrite of the article(barring official editing or unforseen glaring errors), and i don't expect anyone to buckle down and actually read the thing again, so i'll just outline the final revisions:

-Changed "Djbouti" to "Dijibouti" everywhere
-Added in a bit about the independence date year(1977, Spiff smiley - smiley)
-Added a true footnote to the part about the independence year
-Generally tried to make it a little more presentable

Thanks to everyone who commented, encouraged, or made fun of me until i actually started to work on it.
Cheers,
Zach


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The Wizzard, Keeper of Words and the Space Bar

Oh yeah, and added the footnote about ATMs, thanks for bringing it up!


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Tube - the being being back for the time being

Hi!
I can't see anything *really* wrong with the entry. Should make it into the Guide IMO. smiley - ok

Just some nitpicks:

ATM - automated-teller machine
The population is about 1/2 million, not 3/4 million
There are 364 km of paved roads

The last two bits of information are from the current CIA World Factbook, so there might be a fair chance that they're accurate. smiley - winkeye Factbook also features the address of the US embassy which you might like to add.


smiley - cheers
Tube


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Gnomon - time to move on

Aeroflot is still spelt wrong.


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Tube - the being being back for the time being

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The Wizzard, Keeper of Words and the Space Bar

yay!


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Gnomon - time to move on

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Whisky

Congratulations, I just hope this article stops anyone from going anywhere near the place

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whisky


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Henry

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