h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hell, I see your entry is in Peer Review for a week. Sorry I didn't get around to looking at it earlier. There are a lot of grammar points that need to be tidied up. Prepare for some heavy editing! I'll post a list in a few minutes.

eventually heard -- the word "eventually" is completely wrong here. Just leave it out.

our body --> our bodies

Many heard about phosphate and sulphate or read about magnesium or iron at a package of cornflakes --> Many have heard of phosphate and sulphate or have read about magnesium or iron on a cornflakes packet.

In a first notion --> At first

signlalling --> signalling

Sodium(I) -- what does the (I) signify?

responsible positive charges --> responsible for the positive charges

the atoms in there --> the atoms there

called Ionosphere --> called the Ionosphere

Most of the chemistry --> Most of chemistry

electrostatical --> electrostatic

Could be worse.

I'll do them tidying up tomorrow.

The (I) in Na(I) is the notation for it's oxidation state (i.e. it has lost one electron). I'll add a footnote explaining this notation as well, OK?

Thanks.

What about the contents? Is it readable?

HELL

Yes, it's readable.

great.

It has also been accepted now .

I still love your entries, I think this is the third or fourth entry you participated/wrote that I'm recommending.

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Dancer

Yeeee - ha!

Thanks a lot, Dancer.



HELL