A Conversation for Ions

A673940 - Ions

Post 21

Gnomon - time to move on

Hell, I see your entry is in Peer Review for a week. Sorry I didn't get around to looking at it earlier. There are a lot of grammar points that need to be tidied up. Prepare for some heavy editing! I'll post a list in a few minutes.

A673940 - Ions

Post 22

Gnomon - time to move on

eventually heard -- the word "eventually" is completely wrong here. Just leave it out.

our body --> our bodies

Many heard about phosphate and sulphate or read about magnesium or iron at a package of cornflakes --> Many have heard of phosphate and sulphate or have read about magnesium or iron on a cornflakes packet.

In a first notion --> At first

signlalling --> signalling

Sodium(I) -- what does the (I) signify?

responsible positive charges --> responsible for the positive charges

the atoms in there --> the atoms there

called Ionosphere --> called the Ionosphere

Most of the chemistry --> Most of chemistry

electrostatical --> electrostatic

A673940 - Ions

Post 23

Dr Hell

Could be worse.

I'll do them tidying up tomorrow.

The (I) in Na(I) is the notation for it's oxidation state (i.e. it has lost one electron). I'll add a footnote explaining this notation as well, OK?


What about the contents? Is it readable?


A673940 - Ions

Post 24

Gnomon - time to move on

Yes, it's readable.

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Post 25

Dr Hell


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Post 26

Dancer (put your advert here)

It has also been accepted now smiley - cheers.

I still love your entries, I think this is the third or fourth entry you participated/wrote that I'm recommending.

smiley - biggrin-| smiley - bubblysmiley - ok

smiley - hsif

A673940 - Ions

Post 27

Dr Hell

Yeeee - ha!

Thanks a lot, Dancer.

smiley - cheers


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Post 28

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - bubbly

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