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Writing Workshop: A670998 - The Subtle Art of Sulking

Post 1

Inkwash

Entry: The Subtle Art of Sulking - A670998
Author: Inkwash, Speaker of the Underpass - U160431

Ideas, spelling mistakes, moral objections... all are welcome.


A670998 - The Subtle Art of Sulking

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

I like this entry. I only spotted one typo: noticable should be noticeable. You've used it in a few places.

If you want this entry to become an Edited Entry, remove the references to I and me from it.

Other than that, I think this is "Guide Material" and should be submitted to Peer Review.


A670998 - The Subtle Art of Sulking

Post 3

Inkwash

"I and me"! It's my biggest weakness!

I'll look into it. smiley - ok


A670998 - The Subtle Art of Sulking

Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Two points:

1) 'opressed' should be 'oppressed'

2) this sulking ought to be performed in a more public place, ie: the Peer Review. Your entry deserves it smiley - ok



smiley - cheerupsmiley - winkeye


A670998 - The Subtle Art of Sulking

Post 5

Inkwash

smiley - biggrin

Thanks one and all. I'll move it over forthwith!


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