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Peer Review: A6638051 - Numbats
fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be Started conversation Aug 11, 2006
Entry: Numbats - A6638051
Author: fiery opaleye ...just like life: Quite interesting in parts, but no substitute for the real thing - U1671322
These guys are so cute. Kinda like a striped sqirrel with a pointy face.
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U168592 Posted Aug 12, 2006
I like this Entry, as you know. Think it needs some more Peer Reviewers to comment though. You might like to drop by here A4661930 The Loyal Zoological Society and let them know
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steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> Posted Aug 12, 2006
i never even heard of nubats!!
really interesting though, well done
just a few things:
Tounge/toungue = tongue
exclusivly ocasionally = exclusivly, occasionally
them selves = themselves
what birds of prey?
maybe a few more footnotes (e.g. what on earth is a goanna?), links and references
other than that, great entry
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McKay The Disorganised Posted Aug 12, 2006
Good stuff.
One quick typo - "They locate termites using their sence of smell" - that'll be sense of smell.
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U168592 Posted Aug 12, 2006
fiery -
Found some other typos:
>An endagered species, the numbat is the mammal embelem of Western Australia which may have saved it from extinction.<
Should be:
An endangered species, the numbat is the mammal emblem of Western Australia, a fact that may have saved it from extinction.
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fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be Posted Aug 15, 2006
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 24, 2006
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U168592 Posted Aug 24, 2006
Ahh, well done fiery Looks like we'll have to get another one of yours into the EG just as quick as this one and DAAS
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fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be Posted Aug 25, 2006
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AlexAshman Posted Aug 31, 2006
Hi there fiery opaleye - I've just finished SubEditing your entry - you can find the Recommended version at A13911789
Please let me know if it's ok or not - all I've done is sort out small errors and dropped the 'Description' header - and then I'll send it off for inclusion in the Edited Guide.
Alex
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fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be Posted Sep 1, 2006
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Peer Review: A6638051 - Numbats
- 1: fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be (Aug 11, 2006)
- 2: U168592 (Aug 12, 2006)
- 3: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Aug 12, 2006)
- 4: steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> (Aug 12, 2006)
- 5: McKay The Disorganised (Aug 12, 2006)
- 6: U168592 (Aug 12, 2006)
- 7: fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be (Aug 15, 2006)
- 8: h2g2 auto-messages (Aug 24, 2006)
- 9: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Aug 24, 2006)
- 10: U168592 (Aug 24, 2006)
- 11: fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be (Aug 25, 2006)
- 12: AlexAshman (Aug 31, 2006)
- 13: fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be (Sep 1, 2006)
- 14: AlexAshman (Sep 1, 2006)
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