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Peer Review: A6638051 - Numbats

Post 1

fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be

Entry: Numbats - A6638051
Author: fiery opaleye ...just like life: Quite interesting in parts, but no substitute for the real thing - U1671322

These guys are so cute. Kinda like a striped sqirrel with a pointy face. smiley - biggrin


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U168592

I like this Entry, as you know. smiley - smiley Think it needs some more Peer Reviewers to comment though. You might like to drop by here A4661930 The Loyal Zoological Society and let them know smiley - ok


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Post 3

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Very good smiley - smiley

Footnote one: <> smiley - biro A type

forty two centimetres = 42 centimetres

Thanks for writing this!smiley - ok


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Post 4

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

i never even heard of nubats!!smiley - erm
really interesting though, well donesmiley - ok

just a few things:

Tounge/toungue = tongue

exclusivly ocasionally = exclusivly, occasionally

them selves = themselves

what birds of prey?

maybe a few more footnotes (e.g. what on earth is a goanna?), links and references




other than that, great entrysmiley - smiley


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Post 5

McKay The Disorganised

Good stuff. smiley - ok

One quick typo - "They locate termites using their sence of smell" - that'll be sense of smell.

smiley - cider


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Post 6

U168592

fiery -

Found some other typos:

>An endagered species, the numbat is the mammal embelem of Western Australia which may have saved it from extinction.<

Should be:

An endangered species, the numbat is the mammal emblem of Western Australia, a fact that may have saved it from extinction.

smiley - ok


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Post 7

fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be

Thanks guys. smiley - ok


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Post 9

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Wow, spot-on, fiery opaleye !!smiley - disco

Great entry, a fantastic addition to the EG!smiley - applause

smiley - bubbly


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Post 10

U168592

Ahh, well done fiery smiley - biggrin Looks like we'll have to get another one of yours into the EG just as quick as this one and DAAS smiley - winkeye


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fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be

Thanks everyone.smiley - wow


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Post 12

AlexAshman


Hi there fiery opaleye - I've just finished SubEditing your entry - you can find the Recommended version at A13911789

Please let me know if it's ok or not - all I've done is sort out small errors and dropped the 'Description' header - and then I'll send it off for inclusion in the Edited Guide. smiley - ok

Alex smiley - smiley
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fiery opaleye - the happiest little Vegemite as bright, as bright can be

It looks great. smiley - biggrin Thanks Alex.smiley - ok


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Post 14

AlexAshman


Ok, off it goes smiley - oksmiley - cheers


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