A Conversation for The Unhappy Fairy Part 6

Cool!

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ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

smiley - ghost Keep going!
O, yeh, I'd like to see more discription during the dialog, like"Cassie frowned in confusion."He would never hurt me!"
That kind of thing helps you feel what the character is feeling, and how they are responding to what they've just been told.

You have a feel for this! Keep going, S.


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