h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: MPB - A64829965
Author: sinnerman pfank - U9260985


evening

so many distractions!

SP

The measure of how funny this is: I choked on my sandwich when I got to the word 'glint'.

Thanks for the wry observation.

Witty and well-observed.

Absolutely wonderful.

I'd like to have that for , if I may?

Evening

you may indeed - pleased to hear you liked it.

SP

N.B. needs a minor edit - may want to change "where" to "what" on second to last line - or, alternatively, change "Is" to "There's" on the last line

Personally, I think the latter works better

I agree, I think the 'where' is fine, and 'there' is better.

Hi sinnerman, I'm delighted to say that your wonderful poem is now published in .

You can find it at A66211175




Bel

thanks for your help Bel, very kind of you.

Sin

The pleasure was all mine.

How come a poem that appears in is now showing 'This Guide Entry has been hidden, because it contravenes our House Rules'

I propose Back to Entry as sadly the author has ed.

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I can see it fine at https://h2g2.com/entry/A66211175 ?

Yes, the version in is still there, I just wondered why this original version has been hidden. As there's nothing here, there's little point in keeping it in the Writing Workshop, but fortunately is unaffected.

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P.S. You may end up with me poking my head in a few of these conversations, looks like I was subscribed to the AWW for the whole of the time I was away...

You're more than welcome – I hope my dredging up old conversations isn't too annoying. There are some real gems in the AWW, but I'm only commenting on the ones that I think don't belong there as otherwise I'd create a giant muddle.

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