A Conversation for The End of Space - The Story So Far

Writing Workshop: A640883 - The End of Space - The Story So Far

Post 1

spook

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A640883

This is a story called 'The End of Space' that I am working on at the moment. It is not finished, however I would like constructive critisicm on the story so far and ideas about how it could be improved. Thanks.

Spook


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Post 2

WeS

You have a reader here smiley - ok


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Post 3

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

and another smiley - smiley

But... the Writing-Workshop doesn't seem to be the appropriate place for it any more smiley - whistle


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Post 4

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away

Hey, how about removing this thread from the Workshop? It doesn't need review anymore, does it?


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Post 5

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

hello?


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Post 6

spook

writing workshop isn't for review, it's for help with improvement, to have help when working on an entry. I'll probably put this in AWW soon but please nobody rush me.

spooksmiley - aliensmile


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Post 7

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

ok smiley - smiley
er.. could we talk about an upper time limit of, say, 1 year? smiley - winkeye


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Post 8

Silverfish

Can I ask you to move the entry now? (I hope you don't consider this rushing you smiley - smiley)

Thanks
Silverfish


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Post 9

spook

but i thought i had 1 year?smiley - sadface

spook


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Post 10

Silverfish

one year seems like a bit much, and it has been a month since you where last asked. Also, if you moved the entry, it would make the place slightly tidier, and I can't see much point in this being here, as it isn't really suitable for the edited guide.


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Post 11

spook

2 months actually.

spook


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