h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A636969

please have a look and see what you think. I think this may be a bit disjointed so I would like someone else to read through and check it makes sense! Other constructive criticsim is also welcome,

cheers!

L

Lovely!

It's 'Wolfsburg' and 'Hannover' and my only question is, is it really true the early versions had a total of 18kW?

You might want to use the GuideML Footnote feature: simply add

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right where you want the footnote symbol to appear, and you're done


Links into the WWW are done like this:

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(for links inside h2g2 it's <LINK H2G2=.... )
mind the double quotes! They're easily forgotten


Final remark: See you over at Peer Review!

Thanks for the comments. I attempted to add these in and it now looks a lot better! The figures are a bit odd but that is definitely what I found in two different locations! Maybe I shall have another rummage from some different sources.

Thanks for the help!

L

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'The Writing Workshop' to 'A Brief History of the VW Type II Bus'. This thread has been moved back to the Entry as it's been rescued from the Writing Workshop! :-) A new PR thread exists at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F48874?thread=144099