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AlexAshman Started conversation Oct 8, 2005
Entry: Unreal Tournament - the PC Games - A6060052
Author: AlexAshman - U566116
This is a major update of A382277.
A6060052 - Unreal Tournament - the PC Games
Pimms Posted Oct 26, 2005
Good update 
No suggestions for improvements immediately occur to me.
Pimms 
A6060052 - Unreal Tournament - the PC Games
AlexAshman Posted Oct 26, 2005
Thanks for having a look (assuming you weren't just lured here by the 
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A6060052 - Unreal Tournament - the PC Games
Sea Change Posted Nov 8, 2005
Sniper seems to have Elvised.
This looks good from a grammar and readability point of view. I don't find shootemups entertaining, so I have no idea if it's accurate description of the new games, though.
A6060052 - Unreal Tournament - the PC Games
Smij - Formerly Jimster Posted Nov 14, 2005
Just two comments before I reckon this will be ready, and they're both teensy ones:
- 'Weapon evolution' would probably be more logical as a subheader, assuming this is a continuation of the Evolution theme. Otherwise it should be moved down and out of that section.
- The footnote 'See below' should be in brackets instead of footnote tags.
Other than that, excellent. let me know when you're done.
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