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Entry: Immaturity- My Expirence With Teenagers - A6046247
Author: Alice_Davenport - U2184754

I would like this entry to be more informative. Do you think I should bother with such a naritive, strongly opinioned entry?

Hey Alice

I go to high school too, and so totally get what you mean.

But to get the best reception for your entry, you should post it to the proper review forum! Entries like yours, which don't follow h2g2's <./>writing-guidelines</.>, should go in Writing-Alternative, the Alternative Writing Workshop. If you want to write a non-fiction, factual entry about high school (i.e. one that's not from your personal perspective, but is more neutral) you could submit it here or, if it's absolutely finished and ready to go, in PeerReview. Check out <./>DontPanic-ReviewForums</.> for more info on this.

But that's beside the point. Anyway, to sum up, Writing-Alternative is the best place for your entry, and if you want to write a factual entry about high school, then I suggest you check out my entry on high school dances that's in Peer Review right now, 'American High School Dances' - A5646134. Yes, that's a blatant plug. But such is the way the world works.

Good luck!

I think the Entry's a good read as it is -- but of course I have to second the point about its being in the wrong review forum.

If you were to go for a more informative style of Entry, perhaps it could complement the Edited Entry A2754399; having one side of the story, we might as well have the other. But there's no need to replace (as opposed to creating in addition to) what's currently an enjoyable opinion piece.

I would like to take the opportunity to make just one point, regarding the title (which looks different from the last time I saw it -- it's not just my imagination, is it?) -- partly because you've misspelt 'experience', but mostly because it's become a bit of a sweeping generalisation.

how do i move this entry to a different review forum????

First remove it by going to Writing-Workshop, finding its name on the list and clicking on the 'remove' button; if you're using the Brunel skin it'll look like an 'x'. Then submit it as you did before, using 'Submit for review' on the Entry page, but selecting the Alternative Writing Workshop as the desired forum.

Can I just add that I thought this is really well written and, once it gets to the Alternative Writing Workshop, will be greatly admired by all and sundry?

I can? Excellent.

Matt

Author Elvised - Back to Entry?

Seconded!

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