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A599736 - Landart in Rakvere

Post 1

Hati

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A599736

Article about small international art-project.

I am beginner on writing the articles and also English in my second language, so be gentle to me, please.

Hatifnat


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Post 2

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Aaah yes, there we are smiley - smiley

[continuing from the Workshop thread...]

The ... tag is meant to be used for every paragraph anew:

This is Para 1
And this is number 2
etc...

As to English as your second language... the two of us will have to wait for a native speaker to correct the language. As far as I know, the English compare things 'to' each other rather than 'with' each other, but that's all I can say smiley - smiley

As to the description.. could you perhaps give some examples of the artwork which makes part of the project?


Anyway, this is, to the best of my feelings, bound to go into the Edited Guide! smiley - ok


Bossel (Scout and engineer with sligt problems when it comes to art smiley - smiley )


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Post 3

Hati

smiley - biggrin
OK, I started with the P thing, I'll go on with it.

Examples of the artwork? smiley - erm This year they only started to work, so there's nothing to describe yet. Last year there was created a hay womb tied to the trees, or red and blue triangles symbolizing the opposite sides of the life and their chance to exist together, also there was a large compass cut in the grass. I don't feel like I could describe it at all. All this is apart of something and it belongs to the place where it is created. Usually it is destroyed very soon. smiley - sadface

I am not an artist, too.

smiley - cheerupHati


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Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Hey, you just wrote down what I was looking for smiley - smiley

Put that into the entry please!


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Post 5

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

hmm... the researchers with an inclination to arts seem to be on a loooong holiday!


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Post 6

Hati

Seems so. smiley - sadface
Well, at least I made some changes as you suggested.
Let's see, maybe somebody pops in. smiley - winkeye


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Post 7

Witty Ditty

Such beautiful language for what seems like a beautiful art movement.

In short, I like it. Hence why I'm bumping this up.

Stay smiley - cool,
WD


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Post 8

Hati

Thank you, WD! smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Witty Ditty

No problem; the fact that it was languishing at the bottom of PR just looked a bit strange... it's a very good entry.

Keep up the ggod work!

Stay smiley - cool,
WD


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Post 10

Hati

Sorry, I didn't get your point in "the fact that it was languishing at the bottom of PR just looked a bit strange". smiley - sadface


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Post 11

Witty Ditty

Oh; just the fact that no one else (apart for the King of Scouts: Bossel) had seen this great entry - how it could pass anyone by - that sort of thing smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Hati

I see. I'm thinking quite slow today. Sunday is a day after Saturday. smiley - winkeye

Maybe art is not very fascinating. smiley - erm


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Post 13

Solsbury

Looks to be a good article. The subs should be able to clear up any mistakes in your english Hatifnat, but probably don't need to do too much.


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Post 14

Hati

smiley - biggrin


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This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review Forum because your entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

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Post 16

Witty Ditty

smiley - wow

Congrats! smiley - bubbly


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Post 17

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

same from me: Congrats smiley - bubbly

smiley - biggrin


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Post 18

Hati

Thank you, from my whole heart! smiley - biggrin
I am so happy! smiley - biggrin
Maybe I can even write one more entry smiley - winkeye.

smiley - bubbly
smiley - cheers

smiley - biggrin


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