h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A597846

Following on from the entry about The Match, heres a bio about the bloke who won plus a few quotes.

Love to hear what you think of it!

Stay ,
WD

I like this one.

One little point - 'schizophrenic' as a term for 'split personality' in any lay commentary seems to have joined the ranks of the no-no's. I'd be inclined to take it out before you get cries of accusation that you are trivialising a serious mental condition.

Azara

Good point well made - it has been removed with something a little more PC; thanks for telling me before I got flamed !

Any more comments, will be, as always, gratefully received!

Stay ,
WD

A game, set and match entry

alas, I found some typos: quotablity, euphenism
and, is the header 'Foot in Mouth Disease' a pun or a typo?


What should I add?
aah, yes:


Bossel (Scout)

It is a really good entry, particularly for the tennis information
It gives all sides of a player I always enjoy watching.
I like..

Ok, will have those typos done soon - thanks for pointing them out!

Yep, foot in mouth disease is a pun; It was totally intentional

Thanks for the comments; any more will be gratefully received!

Stay ,
WD

I haven't any, other than that this entry should be recommended soon

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Congratulations!

Congratulations, Witty Ditty!
for another great tennis entry!
Azara

Game, set and match!

I think this is a great entry!

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